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我完成的任务,晚了点,远离兄没意见吧：）
个人意见：二楼翻译挺好，但有些话略嫌多余（与原文远了点）。
翻译和创作是有区别的。翻译还是要紧密结合原文。一般情况下（特殊情况除外），简单明了地表达清楚原文的意思即可。
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