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博为思英语	Writing journals is an excellent way to improve one's writing and speaking. Practice makes perfect, as everyone knows. 改了语法和用词, 供参考。另外注意，逗号后面空一格，句号后面空两格; 句首第一个字母大写。 注意分段。--- 博为思英语写作教师 i (I) learn from Baozi-my diary (Learning from Baozi --- My diary) Yoga is my favourate （favorite）sport. I exercise (practise) yoga two or three times a week. It can make my body soft (soften my body) and relex (relax) my nerve (mind?). Yesterday i was (while) at home, suddenly I felt very tired. My neck and back were sored (sore),(but) I didn't know why. I decided to go to (the) fitness club. After one hour (of) exercise, I felt very comfortable: my body (muscles) had been extended (stretched?) thoroughly. Along (with) the soft music, I nearly fell (into不要这个词) asleep. i like yoga , do you like it? (I really enjoy yaga, do you?)
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i learn from Baozi-my diary-lzwhy (413字节 阅读:311次 跟贴:19 2007/04/02 09:52) I like it too! I excrcise yoga this morning!(空)-爱家宝贝 (阅读:198次 2007/04/02 10:24) i exercise yoga at surpass club ,sometimes at home(空)-lzwhy (阅读:109次 2007/04/02 10:50) I like your diary and I love Yoga too .(How to express "英雄所见略同")-BaoZi (150字节 阅读:100次 跟贴：2 2007/04/02 13:32) Great minds think alike .(空)-BaoZi (阅读:98次 2007/04/02 13:40) Great minds think alike :)(空)-yulu (阅读:84次 2007/04/02 13:42) hi, WENDY-yulu (297字节 阅读:110次 跟贴：1 2007/04/02 14:07) Yoga is from india-lzwhy (74字节 阅读:93次 2007/04/02 16:28) so do I(空)-Pierre_xing (阅读:73次 2007/04/02 17:31) Writing journals is an excellent way to improve one's writing and speaking. Practice makes perfect, as everyone knows.-博为思英语 (880字节 阅读:288次 跟贴：1 2007/04/03 10:16) thank you very much!-lzwhy (110字节 阅读:72次 2007/04/03 11:39) mind有"心思,情绪"的意思, make up one's mind是下定决心的意思,nerve是神经的意思,relax my mind有点中式思维...-博为思英语 (148字节 阅读:300次 跟贴：1 2007/04/04 09:39) thank you, i got it(空)-lzwhy (阅读:107次 2007/04/04 10:38) it's very interesting.-我爱拉芳 (383字节 阅读:110次 2007/04/03 11:11) can you (博为思英语）help amend my writing? thank you.(空)-我爱拉芳 (阅读:73次 2007/04/03 11:18) i am a mother too,but i try to choose a little time for learning english.-lzwhy (16字节 阅读:83次 2007/04/03 11:36) thank u. i should learn from you.(空)-我爱拉芳 (阅读:76次 2007/04/03 12:18) sometimes i learn from my daughter because what she's learnt are fresh for me, such as giraffe.-我爱拉芳 (281字节 阅读:108次 2007/04/03 12:33) 谢谢你的信任，修改供参考。Let's make progress step by step.-博为思英语 (859字节 阅读:126次 2007/04/04 09:53) let's together(空)-啾啾 (阅读:49次 2007/04/04 09:56)

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