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修改供参考It is so exciting to see that more and more people are trying their hands at English diaries!
Yulu: what did your husband do that upset you so much?
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Today is sunday. It is sunshine outside, the sky is blue without any cloud.

(Revision: It is Sunday today. The sun is shining and the sky is cystal clear without a trace of cloud.)


I stand in my little garden, looking at the chinese rose which are granting new sprout in this spring, I should have felt a new hope ahead, beause sun, green, flower, clear are not only express beautiful future, but give me a kind of power which can make me keep on working hard as well...

(Revision: I stood in my little garden, staring at the Chinese roses which are blossoming in the warmth of spring. I should have felt cheerful and excited because the sun, budding green leaves, colorful flowers are right in front of my very eyes. They represent the beautiful future that gives me the power and motivation to keep working hard just like before...)

nevertheless, I am not so happy, my husband make me want to cry...:)

(Revision: However, I do not feel the joy in my heart: my husband upset me so bad that I just want to cry... (to be continued))
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