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help!help!
So my poor english. I need your help in my following composition .I hope you correct my wrong words and sentences and give me directions on how to write fluent native english.THANKS.
outline:
1.state the present conditon.
2.give the possible reasons.
3.provide solutions.
Traffic Jam in big cities
Traffic jam is precisely common in many big cities .It is far from new that all typies of vehicles are jammed on main roads in Beijing in every morning and evening .Therefore ,It does not only lead to a amout of polluted air,but also waste drivers' and costomers'time .So ,there is no denying to an obviously fact that traffic jam has been a headachy problem.
Certainly, there are quite a few reasons .But the two followed are rather more significant.
1.Traffic design doesn't meet the need of the increasing number of vehicles. A bad design of cross-road often delies drivers' time .
2.all kinds of accidents aren't resolved in time.
So a lot of work need to do to release traffic jam.
1.we should improve the public traffic and sub-traffic,encourage people to make better use of it .Meanwhile ,the design of cross-road should be more scientific.
2.we should strenghen the control and take action in time .
If we take these measures now, traffic jam will be released someday.
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