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1. You should not use pile up, I think made of or constructed with, pile up is not that good
2. it's better to say earn money or make money, and some money to go to graduate school. yours is a little bit complicated. And your biggest problem is you did not use the idiom we learnt Catch-22.
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I\\\'ll never call it a day unless the most wanted could be captured in person, whatever you do, wherever you are, I\\\'ll get the hold of you, this is Agent Bauer!!
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