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To老鼹鼠：有关小学生的英语写作（探讨贴）
孩子们解决了英文的阅读问题，写作又很现实的摆在面前。
对孩子来说，每天接触的中文要写顺了都很不易，更何况非母语的英文？做个小学生真不容易啊。：）
关于孩子早期的英文写作，我曾经买过NELSON出版集团出版的PM writing系列，感觉对我很有启发。
和阅读一样，国外的写作也是分级的。PM Writing levels 分成1-25个级别，和PM阅读一样从易到难循序渐进。
Nelson的这套书我没有买全。一是在网上我只找到3册（Levels 20/21两册，Levels 24/25 一册），二是根据我家老大目前的水平，低Level的已经没有太大的意义。我真正需要的，也只是它带给我的指导性思路。
国外的写作练习目的明确，针对性很强。看书扉页上的内容介绍，每一项都很细化。
文章的key learning Area是什么? Theme是? 每个部分的Text type? Purpose? Text Structure? Language Features? 等等都有指导提示。
以我买的levels 20/21里 Snails 为例，文章类型分成两个部分，即：Narrrative 和 Information Report. （如图）
PM writing levels 20/21里，除了上面提到的两个部分，还有：
1，Explanation & Narrative.
2，Information Report & Description.
3，Recount & Procedure.
4，Narrative & Exposition.
5，Explanation & procedure.
另一本levels 20/21里的Black Rhions 则分为 Explanation & Narrative两部分.
总体看下来，国外孩子在早期的写作学习中，已经接触到各种各样的体裁了。这为他们今后的写作奠定了坚实的基础。因此，看到国外的学生们写起研究性文章得心应手便也不足为奇了。
下图为Levels 24/25，Dog Tricks 的指导提示介绍：
我想，中国孩子的英文写作在经过一段时间的训练后语法不是问题，但常常会觉得脑子无物写不出东西，大概，没有经过这样系统的训练，也是很重要的一个原因。
希望以上能对你有所启发。共勉。
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附： levels 20/21里 Snail Trails 叙述（Narrative）部分的原文：
Title: Snail Trails
“Oh,no!” I said to Tia, one morning.“Look at our lettuces.”
We were growing lettuces in a tub at home,in the spring.
There were green ones and red ones and ones with crinkly leaves.
Now some of our lettuces had big holes in their leaves.
“I wonder how those holes got there,” said Tia.
The next day, there were more holes in our lettuces.
“I think something has been eating them,” I said.
“Let’s ask Dad what to do,” said Tia.
Dad looked at our lettuces.
“Aha!” he said. “Can you see the silver marks on the lettuce leaves?”
“Yes,” I said.
“Those are snail trails,” said Dad.
We began to follw the snail trails.
They went down the side of the tub, across the path and under some rocks.
Dad carefully lifted up one of the rocks.
“Look at those snails!” I gasped.
There were lots of little snails under the rocks.
“Let’s put them in a bucket and take them to the park,“ said Tia.
“They can eat grass and leaves there.”
“Then our lettuces won’t get any more holes in their leaves!” I said, happily.
Information Report 原文：
Title: All About Snails.
Snails are small animals with soft bodies.
They have no backbone.
They have hard shells to protect their bodies.
There are many different types of snails.
Some snails live on land and some snails live in water.
All snails have four tentacles on their heads.
They have eyes on the longest tentacles.
Snail also have lots of little spiky teeth on a pad in their mouth.
The pad is called a radula.
A snail eats with its radula.
Snails move using a big ‘foot.’
land snails make silvery slime,called mucus, in their fooot.
The mucus help them to move along the ground.
Land snails live under rocks and in other damp, dak places.
Sometimes, many snails live in the one place.
Snails move around at night, or when it is wet.
On sunny days, snails stay out of the sun.
Land snails eat leaves, moss and other plant materials.
Sometimes, snails are pests because they eat plants in people’s gardens.
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