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就说前两句吧
It's not the European badge that makes a German chap cool- although it certainly doesn't hurt. Nobody knew that the library was being used for a secret match throughout a whole afternoon and a night yesterday.
第一句没看懂，如果写出中文后，可能知道怎么改，但是hurt一般用作及物动词和主动语态，如果表达被伤害一般用be injured。
第二句know一般不用于一般过去时而习惯用现在时代替，应该说Nobody knows；throughout a whole afternoon and a night yesterday，句意重复，一般应该表达为throughout afternoon and night yesterday, or whole afternoon and whole night yesterday.
我说得未必全对，但文章中几乎是每句都有或多或少的错误。感觉已经能写较长的句子和文章已经比较好了，还是应该系统学习一下语法进步会更大。
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如果只提问题，那是所谓精英；如果只喊口号，那是纯粹五毛，我只想找块地真正探讨让中国强盛起来之路。欢迎同道来博客坐坐：http://blog.sina.com.cn/gongsunxuanyuanblog |
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